I’m so very pleased to have 3 quite different poems as the monthly feature at this lovely journal: LAST BREATH, CINDY, ON POSTERITY .
I’m so very pleased to have 3 quite different poems as the monthly feature at this lovely journal: LAST BREATH, CINDY, ON POSTERITY .
Lynne Burnett 
Lynne, all these poems are wonderful! I especially love
“a mouth that diets
on platitudes is a mouth dumb
to the grunt and groan of pleasure”
Yes!
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Charlotte, thank you so much for your enthusiastic thumbs up to that poem in particular! And that the others resonated too means a lot 💜
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Beautiful three poems! Well shared 💐
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Thank you so much!💜
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Congratulations, Lynne. All three stand out, but these in particular…
from Last Breath –
“or / we’ve got it backwards, and there’s more to the story”
and
“tell me more”
On Posterity – wonderful ars poetica
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Oh thank you so much, Ken! That last line for “Last Breath” was a late addition so I’m pleased it resonated!
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